W.A.L.T... Write full paragraphs and add in more compound and complex sentences in our writing .
Next time I will not trail off in my writing and will try to link everything together . I enjoyed Drawing a picture and thinking should I make it complex or simple .
The two girls stared at the wall wondering why it makes such a big effect on them. When it is so simple . The black and white wall is so simple yet so complex . They go closer to the plaque and see that it was made by an accountant whose mother had just passed away due to stress. The artist said that some things need to be simple in life . The girl on the right called Delilah felt a certain chill as if she was supposed to be here looking at the painting , as if she needed to take everything from that plaque in and remember . The paintings were beautiful but messy , messy but simple . The simplicity of the paintings make the world feel full . Even though she knew that the world was an empty hearted place when she looked at that painting she felt like there wasn’t war going on like there wasn’t children being forced to work in different countries , she felt like there was no sin in the world . Because she had this feeling she decided she had to meet up with the artist to ask her how she made her feel that way . so she went to her trusty sidekick ,the internet . She was so surprised that the internet let out so much private information . She got her phone number her address and her full name .
The artist's name was “ coincidentally “ Delilah Rose Maye which was The same as her . It wasn’t until she looked at the address she noticed that it was her . She went to her mother's grave and asked for answers . But she heard silence . She then thought what if I painted it in my sleep . She went back to the gallery to investigate and what she found out is astonishing . The painting was admitted into the gallery the night she found out her mother had passed away . She then asked the owner f the art gallery if she could see security tapes of May 5 2017 because that was the day that she supposedly admitted the painting into the gallery . They said yes . On the camera to her surprise was a video of her Delilah rose maye giving the painting to the front desk in her Pajamas . She then went back home to test if her painting skills were as good as they are in the painting on the wall of the gallery . She got out her old easel and painting kit and gave it a go it wasn’t nearly as good or as symmetry as the other one. So from that day she vowed to only paint with her eyes closed .
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